The first one is nice, but the background's colors should match those of the render's. Also, try blending in Altair a bit more. The first is is pretty good, but the background could use a bit of work, and personally, I don't think wireframes were the way to go. To add on to this, try adding more effects surrounding the prince and keep the text simple. (Try using a simple font, such as Sans) The third one is also pretty good, though I think there should be more effects surrounding Hitsugaya.
1st one looks over sharpened on the right side and thers not much going on in it, and also looks a bit empty. Second ones background looks decent but the render looks overly sharpen and it lacks depth. Third one lacks depth and a never like those borders. However the flow in the last 2 are ok. The third needs blending in the render.
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