Deadpool

[funn]

here is my latest sig "DEADPOOL"

B/W


Ver 2


Ver 3


So guys CnC is the thing that i want from you all

[Dom]

I've used this render before with Fuzer. I don't think this is one of your better pieces unfortuantly. A suggestion, the sword you should rub out and just have his gun because you can't see the whole sword so it would look better without it. I like what you've done with the text but I can't really work out the background.

[jorrne]

I think it would look much better in colour but just not the colours you chose. :/ I'm guessing the gradient map was too "strong".
v3's the best. effects at the white line are really nice. Text is just ok though. Would prefer it to not be blended in with the sig but your choice though.

[zole]

Hmmm V2 is the best IMO the washed out look is better for this tag i feel maybe make it abit more white, add an Exposure adjustment and play with the middle and bottom settings abit but dont do them to much and it gives a little fadded white washed out look

I like the tag but its a Tad monotone :S maybe blur that white line and get rid of that obvious smudge at the top of the white line Get rid of the border and add some awesome text and there you have it

Overall nice job but room for improvments

[SSSSK]

sword=distraction get rid of it but apart from that its an ok piece but not your best

[Takken]

Not your best at all. The BG has too much on, too blurred and that pen tool line or w/e is on the right looks ridiculous. Misplaced. Too dark in some areas, a lil' bright in some. The effects at the bottom of the focal and at the top near the focal ain't so bad though.

Have no idea what you were trying to achieve though. Sorry mate. Ain't cutting for me, this one.

[Papa]

OKay, overall not a bad tag. When working with stocks like this as the Background, the frequent changes in dark to light makes it very hard to keep your tag interesting and under control. its good but IMO the BG held the tag back a lot.

IN v2 and V3 the purple\orange gradient map is very very prevalent. A while back the purple\orange gradient map got whored so much it's become kind of an old style now. IMO i'd drop it it doesnt do much for color and kinda looks weird.

V3 is the ebst. Teh smudging is okay but i think you should overlap it onto the render. It needs a bti more blendiing right now and overlapping it would help fix that.

Overall not bad. But no text? And i also agree with SSSK. the sword is a distraction i'd drop it.

[funn]

ok guys i will try to improve wht to all told me to do
and papa there is a text i just liquified it but it is still visible i think
will post a newer ver soon

[funn]

Ok edited versions posted check out the main post ^_^

[Dom]

Now that you've removed the sword you can still see where it originally was because the C4D has been rubbed out. D: