GFXVoid Graphic Design Forum

Remove Text Formatting
Loading...

» Online Users: 3,098

0 members and 3,098 guests
No Members online

» Site Navigation

 > FAQ

» Stats

Members: 35,442
Threads: 103,075
Posts: 826,688
Top Poster: cc.RadillacVIII (7,429)
Welcome to our newest member, Lekelindids
Results 1 to 4 of 4
  1. #1
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Scotland
    Posts
    67

    Default My first big art

    well as the title says its my 1st big art, and i gave it a good go. Read several tutorials and took peices outta each one and added to make my own style of picture.

    However i think the bubbles in the picture ruin it and i didnt no what else to put in it as it was so empty.

    Link: http://img190.imageshack.us/i/underwaterh.jpg/

    everything in the picture i made myself APART from the bubbles they were a brush as i couldnt find a tutorial on bubbles so i cheated slightly lol

    CnC please and do tell how i can improve please

    Thanks
    ~Heepsy
    Most Recent:


  2. #2
    Join Date
    Sep 2008
    Location
    England
    Posts
    1,459

    Default

    not bad but needs a wow factor anda real focal. put a scuba diver in and put effects around him or something, something that makes this piece stand out. not bad though, the top left is low quality.

  3. #3
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Scotland
    Posts
    67

    Default

    thx i no its not great and thx for the idea of the scuba diver ill get to work on trying my hardest to get this good
    Most Recent:


  4. #4

    Default

    Agreed, needs more. But what you have is good so far.

    Good tones for the underwater, though it is a bit heavy on the purple in the deeper water, then again that could be what you are going for.
    Oblivion-Saeren

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Powered by vBadvanced CMPS v4.1.1