Another sig.

[DJ Wiz Kid]

Hey guys, just made a new sig since my last one wasn't the greatest. I didn't bother in putting any text since that seemed to be one of the bigger problems of my last ones. Hope you like it.

[jazzworth]

The effects are nice, and the stock is dynamic, but what it lacks is a certain flow to it. I can see you doing a lot more with that stock, but right now it just seems like a horribly bright sig. I think it needs to play a lot more with shadows, because it's just overwhelmingly bright.

[DJ Wiz Kid]

Alright cool, I'll try making it darker as soon as I can.

[Shannon Apple]

You need to think about bringing focus to your focal point (the render). My eye is not drawn to the render. Think about the flow. There are several tricks you can use to bring focus, even slightly sharpening areas of the render and soft erasing parts of the effects that are over your focal to make it stand out a little more. You could add text quite easily in that area to the right of the render also.

[+s9.Oath]

i agree with them its way too bright and need to work on flow but its good man your getting better keep it up

[The Fallen]

I like it, BUT it's a bit too bright for me.

[Ascarine]

Shield your eyes Guys and Gals, looking into something that bright might blind you. Doesnt look bad though dude. Thats the only comment i can give at present is that it is too bright. I might post again when i can think straight lol.