Iron Man signature

[diabloUNDERWRLD]

Another signature that i made when i was reeeally bored... tell me what ya think.

[Ptka]

The left side with the render is very good but everything is very obvious.
The C4D's work well, but they are very clear what is a C4D.
The flowing ones on the other side don't work as well as they would if there was part of the render there, if his arm was sticking out and the C4D's were going along his arm it would be perfect.
Just look at it again after your finished and ask yourself if you can't point out all the specific elements. If you can, it means that things are just a tad too obvious.