The Joker!! Abstract??

[Victor76]

Just messing with some tuts..

[KidBuu]

joker and purple is shit
the blending is sucking
the text isnt any better
i really dont like this one
the smudging should be done carefully taking in mind the renders quality

[Victor76]

i was trying something.. didnt work the way i wanted to...meh.. back to the drawing board!!!

[.TheMentalists.]

Not your best.The purple is eugh

[+s9.Oath]

take the render out of it all together and you have something decent thats all filters you did on the bg keep working tho man you will get better

[Papa]

joker and purple is shit
the blending is sucking
the text isnt any better
i really dont like this one
the smudging should be done carefully taking in mind the renders quality

buu dude. i've seen you give better cnc than that. You dont have anything good to say or anyway way on how to fix it?


Victor IMo the render in this is a bit too far out to the side. Mind you it is a good idea, but it takes the rule fo thirds to an extreme. IN this case having the render so far away from the cnter renders the text the focal and the render the secondary.
scoot him in. make him part of the family of sig and intrduce him to the text XD.

The BG is trippy. A bit oldschool tbh. Next time try a more smudgign focused bg. Daemons tuts are great for that.
If you have a nice stock clipping masks can always help out a signature. I reccomend you check out a few tuts it'll help you out a lot.

Now that we've had you scoot the render in, scoot the text out a bit. Move it towards the focal like a pair. Two peas in a pod. Makes the text blend more with the tag but puts it in a very undistracting spot. So maybe just off his right shoulder a bit?

Anyway not bad but needs some bg and placement work. Check out some tuts and you'll get your gfx skills movin.

[Victor76]

Tx for the suggestive ideas.. appreciated as always ..

[Dron]

colours are really bad, work on them asap

[Victor76]

just something i was messing with in some tuts..