Quake

[Victor76]

Tried to keep it clean as possible..

[KidBuu]

if u remove the man and add some thing like on the right this did be quitee godo one
the monotone isnt helping it though
and its kinda lq

[Victor76]

i made some changes to it and added some more color to it..

[Linda]

i like v2 more but text is bad, try work on it and the focal should be in middle, it makes it look better but just my opinion.

[Victor76]

thats always the challenge positioing.. if you put it in the middle then you have to make the decision of text or no text if there is where to put it.. but i think overall progress being made i might just do without text and just make the art and post.. might be the safer option.. Tx Linda for your input..

[.TheMentalists.]

The v2 is better. But i feel there is not much blending the render in. The text needs work and well the colours do not match the render. Keep it up though.