Expression - Nas

[(CK)Raven]

Made it with a pretty low quality render, but I wanted to give it a shot anyway and did what I could with it. Let me know whats good (or bad), try and be nice though. Cheers.

[DR809]

The focal is too dark you might want to lighten it up a bit it. Imo it throws off a bit.

[Dron]

that 2nd cliping mask not working that well and it should be on bigger canvas, like left side alot tho >.>

[diabloUNDERWRLD]

The background (copy) render ruins it. Focal needs to be a bit lighter as well, with bigger canvas. Other then that, the effects and BG are pretty good. Keep workin at it though!

[(CK)Raven]

The amount of hours put into this piece really don't do justice to the outcome, I'm just not feeling this one. Thought it was just me but apprently not, I think I'ma just move on to the next one. Thanks for the input guys.

[Victor76]

I dont like the flow.. a little to much color in the bg..

[Nutter]

I actually quite like it.
I do think the rapper is a bit low in the sig, but I love the colours and C4D effects that are going on.