First Ever Vector

[MrInsane]

Well, it took me an entire day to make my first vector.
Here's the original:

And here's the vectored one:

well rate and comment

[Joekz]

rrreeaally good

[MrInsane]

yea think so? thanks lol

[Joekz]

mm especially for your first..im working on a vector right now for someone as a tatoo..its a pain in the @$$...

[cC.ShorterGFX]

well im sorry but u can sooo tell u didnt make this.the render isnt cut the same or anything. and u couldnt do this as ur first either

[PRJsober]

very good for your first. better than my first. keep it up

[Daemon]

well im sorry but u can sooo tell u didnt make this.the render isnt cut the same or anything. and u couldnt do this as ur first either

Ehm dont know what you mean exactly, but why shouldnt he be able to do this the first time? my first vector was more clean and better than this? however it doesnt look like a vector it looks like cutout, and not a good one sorry mate when you are making vectors try creating smooth curves,

[Pet]

well im sorry but u can sooo tell u didnt make this.the render isnt cut the same or anything. and u couldnt do this as ur first either

I would like to point out to you that there are several things different between his vector, and the picture he made it from, the first being that he didn't use any gradients, and the picture has lots. For beginners getting nice curves is hard enough, making all the gradients is extremely hard.

For your first vector it looks good, but as Dœmon said, work on keeping your lines smooth. I do like how you made it your own by not using the outlines like done in the original.

[MrInsane]

Thanks for the comments.

well im sorry but u can sooo tell u didnt make this.the render isnt cut the same or anything. and u couldnt do this as ur first either

Ughh this is really my first vector.