my first attempt

[S&maN]

my first sig ever lol. its based off the current style that most people seem to be using. just not done nearly as well lol. please help me improve it.

[RussiA]

heck.. wow i really like it.. seriously although the text could be improved (i'm also having that same trouble) and mabye adding a few c4ds and try blending the render more.. but it's a w0w for me for your first sig man..

[RavenE]

Great colours, and for your first try that's great. Try non-default fonts and use clipping masks on the text.

[Ascarine]

It's a hell of a lot better than when i first started doing sigs. main thing i will say is thing i will say about it is that the focal is way too blurry, and that the sides needs filling for a background, also scrap the text until you are confidant with your sig making cos text is the hardest bit to get right. I personally quite like it but there are main points like i said above that need addressing. Keep at it dude could be seeing some good work from u

[Dom]

This is really good for your first. Because this is your first and it's looking like this already it's actually quite hard for me to give you any constructive feedback because your on the right track.
Just work on blending, text and empty space.
Good job, keep it up!

[Coobie]

Man you're a natural. It really shows nice flow and some depth. The lighting is pretty nice as well. As the others have said perhaps text and placement.

[flatty]

Your first, WOW
Try adding some effects with c4d's and such
Might could make some at the back for depth and such

Keep it up