HELP ME PLEASE!

[Dakota]

Hi guys,
im in the final for a gfx tourney/battle on a dance site and i need som quick tips on how to finish it off, like in my eyes it doesnt look finished.

thanks here it is.



the theme was black and white, it had to have cwalkerz on it.

[.blueflare]

does it HAVE to be ALL bnw? cuz if not then add some cyan/magenta in there :P

but as it is, its beast, text should be a bit more sharpened/brighter but its good like that as well the effects are good , only prob is that the contrast between the two doods are really different. try to make them more similar. good shit tho. hope ya win =D

[Papa]

nice effects. I'd say drop the double focal if ya can but if they BOTH have to be there maybe just add some more depth? A couple of light flares would be nice, or maybe just a nice bokeh/and or something in the foreground.