Tenjou

[SaTe]

Rate this one please

[Dom]

One of your best from what I've seen. Bit too empty on the left, the splattering is good though. Erase the C4D with a soft round brush on the guy (focal point) and crop that right side in by roughly 150 pixels(?). You'll have to just experiment with that. Really like the lighting. Text ruins it a lot. Change that.
Not bad, keep it up.

[SaTe]

Thanks Mr. Dom.. For your comment.. I confused.. Which one i want to use for the text....

[Dom]

Would look better without it at the moment.

[SaTe]

Ok thanks.. I'll try it.. Bumping.. Ohh.. I hate sunday..

[ToxicDesire]

hmm well not to mean hehe but you should try to remove that splatter from his fist where the c4ds are cause it kills the effect =p. and you could try a clipping mask for the text and erase with a soft brush the ends if your tryin to make a disappearing text :]. I like your c4d usage though, its hot haha

[SaTe]

Thank's... It's not mean.. I'll do that.. Mean critics is like this.. "your c4d is mess".. Once again thanks