First Succesful LP

[Takken]

My first ever successful LP. Please point out the bad and what I can improve on. Tell me areas that need special attention.

[Pet]

Looks really good, though I would minimize the empty space on the top. Maybe have all the buildings strait up and down, without the fish eye lens curve.

[Chris]

The dots seem kind of abstract and dont provide any real value to the piece. You might want to try to blend these in with the piece, so they don't look so layered. A bit more fine detail in the buildings may give this an edge; the blurring in some places sort of takes away the interesting aspect of the piece.

Good job takken.

[Julian]

haha yeah you didn't fail this time good job