zack sig....

[munchiez0011]

give me some tips about text ......

[Shiznitz]

it moves... juk! I know i'm not very good at text myself, but i guess the idea is that text blends in (and is part of, not the focal) of the sig... So making it flash and move totally gets the attention of the sig away to the text... Make the text part of, but not the main part of the sig, kind of 'undercover'... Pick a nice font, blend it in, but never (just my opinion though) make it move (and i know the text on my current sig is sucky, the idea was to make a pixel-comment on it for some sotw... ) (covered myself there, haha)

Otherwise, the sig is a bit ehm.. too pixely or sharpenend, you can actually count the amount of pixels on the render etc. try to blend it all together a bit more (the basic idea is very nice), but too much pixelling/overlightning takes away the overall flow.

Again, just my penny of thoughts, pls show the results if you change it!]

warm greetings, shiz

[jice21]

agree...check out some tuts man, they really help and give you some fresh ideas. keep practicing though as its the only way to improve

[munchiez0011]

okay here....i updated it

[SaTe]

That's good one.. Good job

[Lolindir]

I like it... but maybe you should blend the render a little bit more, so it doesnt look 2 cropped, if you know what I mean...

[Julian]

nice animation im loving it can you make me an animation of a chick playing chess with a whale

thanks in advance

[munchiez0011]

nice animation im loving it can you make me an animation of a chick playing chess with a whale

thanks in advance

sorry cant do.......im not that good

[Shannon Apple]

Nice improvement on that one. The overall quality of the sig is greatly improved =)

The moving text was just ugh. Never use animated text unless the text is focal, it looks tacky. The text on the new version is nicely done. gj

[DR809]

On the updated sig lower the capacity on the text a little so that it blends nicely. Make sure its legible though. The extra light source on the right doesn't work either since the render suggests the light is coming from only one side. Tone down the sharpening a little its over shapened. Otherwise good job looks nice