Vice Ultralounge Flyer

[twofivedesigns]

Took about an hour and 20 mins, what would you change if you could change something?

[Sexercise]

Not bad for an hours worth of work.
Wouldn't change a thing. It's straight to the point, crisp and clear.
All that matters is if the client is happy.

[Scrib]

I think its nice, but I think I would change the text that says ladies free till... etc so that it's bigger. because in the advertisement the first thing I looked at was the dj legacy part, but it would be better if the first thing I looked at was the ladies free part as that is the part that is going o attract people to the 'ultralounge' Sorry fr the bad typing im in a hurry.

[twofivedesigns]

I completely understand ^^^ but I guess that DJ has a huge buzz in the area and the client said make him stand out first htne the ladies second, I guess he will attract the ladies lol. Thanks for the feedback.

[gr4ph1kP4ND4]

in stead of the highlights on the words simply being random, i think if you accented the words with a highlight behind it, it would look great. i love the layout, it looks really clean and crisp, and the reds you chose all look amazing together, to much to the contrary of what i would have normally thought. great job

[twofivedesigns]

Thank you, I guess maybe accent certain areas and keep it consistent will bring this together.