cold flames

[Xelo]

hello everybody.

my first entry here. it has been a while ago, and i felt rusty, so i followed a tut. ( - thanx DRAG()N - ) this is the outcome. c&c welcome.



v2 with fixed arm.. (couldn't find the edit button btw)

[gr4ph1kP4ND4]

it looks really great in general, i feel that this would look SO much better if it werent a sprite thing. both sprites are way too similar, their arms are in the same fashion, along with the head and the torso. looks repeated. i love how the sprites seem very integrated with the blue flames, but again, i feel that this background would look great if the object focus was bigger. i mean like amazingly great.... :P

[Xelo]

it looks really great in general, i feel that this would look SO much better if it werent a sprite thing. both sprites are way too similar, their arms are in the same fashion, along with the head and the torso. looks repeated. i love how the sprites seem very integrated with the blue flames, but again, i feel that this background would look great if the object focus was bigger. i mean like amazingly great.... :P

thanx for your comment p4nd4. actually i hadn't noticed the similarity of the sprites. but you are right about that, the left sprite should have his right arm stretched to the left side (with the flow). I'll try to fix that. If i was to put in one bigger focal i'd have to start all over. Guess i am to lazy for that.

[Dom]

There is a 30 minute limitation.

I like the tag, has a nice flow, placement and such but I think there should be more colours in there - ask .blueflare to show you his sprite tag - that's a perfect sprite in my opinion. Keep it up though, there's nothing wrong with this!

[Jool]

It's great, but I sort of don't like how there's 2 sprites in the tag.

However it gets points for originality.

[Xelo]

thanx for comments

[ToxicDesire]

Alright this does look smexiie butt there should be 1 sprite anddd a lil bit more effects. : D Nice though!