Not bad, the racing car tag is too plain. All i can see is a bunch of smoke there lol. I realise some of the render/stock is LQ/Grainy=Low Quality. The text in some of the tags like the 3rd, 7th and the garra tag is too distracting. as for the last tag, no effects are goin on. The Jessica tag has what many people called Floating Head Syndrome i think. The signature focal is a head which isnt really nice to me IMO.
My fav is the Naruto tag. Good text placement and it wont distracts me. Light Source is good and try to erase some of the effects at the bottom left at the sleves. Make the tag to hav a more "YEAH" feeling, if u know wat i mean. Well... that is all i guess^^ Good job
some good work here, your text placement is nice in ur sigs, but the font's don't all fit each sig type in them. blending of ur renders is very nicely done good job on that, composition is good in most of them, agreed about the fhs in the jessica alba sig, good way to fix the floating head syndrome is to either reduce the size of ur render a lil or start off with bigger canvas so you can crop it proportionally to the render. good stuff papichoolo definately see progression from first one to last.
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