Touch Me - Rihanna

[Touch]

What do you think? I don't really like it.. xDD

[Dakilence]

well i like it a lot and in my oppinion i think just to lower opacity a bit on those stars that falls on her face to make it look more realistic

[Papichoolo]

Clean the face and u have a nice tag there.

[Takken]

Lacks flow. Nice smudging. Bad face. Nice concept. Space is too empty. Text ain't too shabby but I would drop it a bit lower.

[XenoDestruction]

Lacks flow. Nice smudging. Bad face. Nice concept. Space is too empty. Text ain't too shabby but I would drop it a bit lower.

what he said, hate the face effects bit nice concept. Cant really see effects goin on, c4ds?

[Epiph]

what he said, hate the face effects bit nice concept. Cant really see effects goin on, c4ds?

C4Ds aren't really necessary for this, IMO..

anyway, it's cool, but work on the lighting, and make the flow more vivid, it's lookin' pretty plain right now.

also, i suggest getting rid of the lines under the text...they're adding too much focus to the text, and the text is pretty decorative enough, IMO..

[Touch]

Has anyone got an idea how I could add some flow?

[Touch]

Okay, here is my second version:



You think it's better?

[Xelo]

Has anyone got an idea how I could add some flow?

oh my the cleaned face is muchobetteros, but the ornament in her hair turns white over the bg wich is no good. (wrong layersetting) Flow should be in the direction of her looking imo; something like this:

[Epiph]

^agree.