Burstout

[Xelo]

Got stuck.. what to do?

[Fur]

hmm I like it, but I would throw in some lighter color to almost make the girl looks like shes going into a light? Just a thought its pretty nice as it is tho

[Touch]

I like the idea. You can really put a great flow in it.
But in this case, it's not too good. I don't know.. maybe low quality, it needs more light I think. Mabye smudge a little bit more. I don't like the right side. But nice

[excellence]

its flat, needs depth, and some of it is low quality, but i like the flow and the colors

[l PaNdEmOnIuM l]

get rid of the c4d going straight up from her chest and add more colors that match what you have and add more depth