Nikeeeezzz.

[ceeruhl]

First large work ever.

Comment and Critique, thanks.

[Nutter]

It's attractive and nicely done. I do think that the shoes and text clash a bit. If I didn't know they were Nike shoes, I wouldn't know what the text said.

It lies in the fact that you've used the shoes to cover the text, when they should be complimenting each other.

It's interesting, but see if you can work on your focal points and placements a bit more.

[-MM.Kritez]

i dont really like the effects on the shoes. its not as clean, alittle sloppy IMO.

text is nice, but im not sure how well it matches with the shoes

[chemicalrubber]

Nice concept, the effects and glow are good but sloppy (the black area - inconsistent shading), maybe you can add more shading or reflections to give the impression of a horizontal plane. Text colour is appropriate, but maybe you can add more effects to blend it with the shoes.