Forever Yours - new sig

[Saika]

VERSION ONE

Before you say anything, I know it doesn't have any really fancy effects on it or anything, but I kinda like it that way (:
Anyway, that was how it began, so this is the original.

I got some feedback from another site and decided to take their advice/suggestions and tweak it a little bit...

V.2 EDITED

I think this kind of has a softer feel to it...maybe it's just me?

EDITS:
1. Took out the text.
2. Tried to change the contrast of her arm/face so it wasn't so harsh against the darker colours.
3. Added some blurring which hopefully gives way to the focal point more and, maybe at a push, adds a bit more depth instead of just standard shadows/highlights.

Your opinions?

[Nutter]

I love the first version.

The second one feels a bit green, and it looks better with the text. It actually might look good if the text was closer to her back (and the pair of white flowers) as well as being a bit easier to read.

It's nice, and it's simple.

[excellence]

hmm where have i seen this design before? lol it looks so fimiliar!!

neway idk the first is too sharp, and the second is too blurred, it needs to be like right in the middle of those 2 versions haha, other than that looks good, im actually gonna say that this border is actually nice

[Saika]

I love the first version.

The second one feels a bit green, and it looks better with the text. It actually might look good if the text was closer to her back (and the pair of white flowers) as well as being a bit easier to read.

It's nice, and it's simple.

Thanks :3
I've done some editing on them both to include the text, though I think I should find a different font really...
Text was never my strong point ^^;
plus I've lost a bit of the detail on her skin in the first one which has changed it slightly. Bah.

hmm where have i seen this design before? lol it looks so fimiliar!!

neway idk the first is too sharp, and the second is too blurred, it needs to be like right in the middle of those 2 versions haha, other than that looks good, im actually gonna say that this border is actually nice

Haha, I have no idea. It was just a random render I picked up to practise with xD
I thought the blurring on the second on was quite nice, but looking over it I can see how it can come across as too blurry. I might try doing that layer again to see if I can get it right (:

Thank you both for your feedback and I'll be sure to keep it in mind when I next go to edit it (:

VERSION 3A


VERSION 3B

[The Fame Monster]

Woahh, this is excellent. Especially 3B.

I recommend a different font though. To me it looks like "POHEVER TOURS".

Aside from that, I really like the blurring you have done. Smoothens the whole thing out, especially the flowers, the vines of which originally had too much contrast.

Very well done.

-The Fame Monster

[Saika]

Woahh, this is excellent. Especially 3B.

I recommend a different font though. To me it looks like "POHEVER TOURS".

Aside from that, I really like the blurring you have done. Smoothens the whole thing out, especially the flowers, the vines of which originally had too much contrast.

Very well done.

-The Fame Monster

Thank youuu (: I really appreciate the feedback.
I've edited it again with a new font. I did two versions again just so I could compare text placement but I think I like it closer to the flowers anyway.

4A:


4B: