Starcraft

[jorrne]

[oNo]

I like it, the effect is great, but it doesn't seem to have a focal point that is very clear. the text works fine, but the borders are un even..
I don't know if you meant to do that. But it doesn't look right to me.

[DR809]

The focal is veryyyyy unnoticable. The text doesn't really work for me, pretty messy, and imo the size is kinda awakard for what you had in mind. otherwise id work on it some more.

[Papa]

not bad jorrne. I'd liek to see you commit more to one centered color scheme. Not feeling the border but i know your a fan of those so...yeah.

The text isnt bad but delete the duplicate and just keep it one color, probabaly the same as the border if your gonna keep it, otherwise just pick it as your main color.

good blending.

[Rexy.]

not bad jorrne. I'd liek to see you commit more to one centered color scheme. Not feeling the border but i know your a fan of those so...yeah.

The text isnt bad but delete the duplicate and just keep it one color, probabaly the same as the border if your gonna keep it, otherwise just pick it as your main color.

good blending.

Great criticism, i agree with everything addressed here