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too plain i guess. the cut of his collar is also bothering me just smudging and placing the render in the bg will not do the trick man,
"You can delay but time will not"
I agree with starwar, its relly plain. It would be nice to see some more depth and flow, also the text is very big, it takes the focus off the focal. Look up some tuts and im sure that you'll improve.
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keep at it!
is this better?
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