Hello

[l PaNdEmOnIuM l]

[Nutter]

Hi..............



Very simple and clean. Like the effects and how it has an Extra Terrestrial theme. Would look better if the text was a bit clearer. It gets lost in the effects.

[cC.ShorterGFX]

i think you've try way to hard to create flow here and spoiled the focal. right side is good. left is bad