Neku and Lightning

[Altered Tundra]

Cnc if you will :3

[Renz]

all good.
but the light is too strong. just reduce i a bit but you can also add some flow on the first one.
btw nyc work dude.

[Papichoolo]

Too much Bright.

[Ascarine]

As has been said before it's too bright but you also need to work on your blending and creating a focal. Read a few lighting tutorials as well. Really not a good idea to but a huge bright light directly on your focal as in your second one.

[Kotora]

The composition is good, just the focal that's lacking immensely.

[FCA_Gfx]

Too much bright :S
but its good 7.5

[shiv96]

Too Bright

[TatorGFX]

I understand the concept you intended, but it doesn't blend well. What makes a good signature is the blending, because you don't want it to look pasted on.
It's too bright, and next time when looking for a render, try to find one that you can put a sense of depth, onto so it looks 3-D, not a 2-D figure.
Everything is messy, and needs to be planned out, so it won't look messy.
I suppose you put effort, and actually tried, so that shows you have determination.