A failed design,and i need help,please :3

[Demon4]

Me again,so tried something new,it failed in a way :/



Link : http://keneinberg.deviantart.com/art...sign-151847630

And now,i need some help on the text,i saw people commenting on the "design by Ken Einberg" and it isnt good on this one either,so help on the text with that please :3 and alot of comment please,i love reading them.

K love yaaaa

[Soap]

Firstly, your smiley appears to have a ballbag on it's chin not :3

Secondly, the design isn't too bad. I don't see what the problem is. Perhaps play with some extra lighting and colours, but other than that...