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  1. #1
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    Default I started writing poems.

    Umm, I'll let you guys in on the back story of why I started writing these.

    I never really thought of myself as the apathetic genius but apparently I was, according to all my teachers who said my vocabulary was great and that I had a way with words, but whatever.

    I applied for a job at this place called Standard Parking which is basically a parking garage at the airport.

    My official job title is Cashier/Statue I basically sit inside a bullet-proof booth for 8 hours, I take a ticket, put it in the machine, and say "that'll be *number on the screen" they either whine and crab, or hand me money or credit card, I scan it, or give change and they drive off.

    It gets INCREDIBLY boring in that booth and after running out of books to read and music to listen to, I remembered this poem I wrote in 10th grade for English class.

    "The Human Stain."

    The world is burnt dead
    upon the ashes these beasts do tread
    millions upon millions all in pain,
    the answer is simple; The Human Stain

    My teacher really liked it and she said I should think about writing more. So a mere three years later, I did write more.


    and here they are....


    Beautiful Girl

    When I saw your face,
    I had to do some double-takes.

    I can't get you out of my head,
    All my other memories have fled.

    Beautiful girl, oh beautiful girl,
    please oh please just give me a whirl.

    You're so funny and you're so pretty,
    Talking to you makes me dizzy.

    You're so smart,
    and you've stolen my heart.

    Beautiful girl oh beautiful girl,
    please oh please just give me a whirl.

    such long red vibrant hair,
    you make me jump right into the air.

    you could make a dark room bright,
    oh it's going to be a beautiful night.

    Beautiful girl oh beautiful girl,
    Why can't you just give me a whirl?




    Pitiful

    Life is pretty like a flower,
    Up until the winter devours.

    Life is fragile like glass,
    Up until it's broken by some ass.

    Life is innocent like a newborn baby,
    Up until he grows up and gets all crazy.

    Life can't be a miracle,
    This alleged god is too cynical,
    They claim all he made is beautiful,
    Just look at it in full, look at it in full,
    It's just so damned pitiful.
    Beautiful Girl 2

    I wish that I could be with you,
    Laying down cuddling with nothing to do.

    Staring into eachother's eyes,
    While our minds zone out into the skies.

    Our heads will rise up into the clouds,
    While we lay down and listen to our hearts pound.

    My beautiful girl oh yes it's true,
    Oh beautiful girl I'm in love with you.




    Beautiful Girl 3

    Beautiful girl I'm so in love with you,
    Let's just cuddle all night with nothing to do.

    Beautiful girl I'll do anything for your love,
    because, beautiful girl you're my dove.

    So innocent and pure,
    My beautiful girl, you are the cure.




    Beautiful Girl 4

    Beautiful girl please let me take you out of here,
    Away from all this crap that you don't need to hear.
    We really should get our minds clear,
    So blinded by love it's our biggest fear.

    Hey beautiful girl, please let's just go,
    To a place that no one knows.

    We can spend all night talking about stupid stuff,
    Beautiful girl, I could never get enough.

    We can laugh all night,
    Stay up until we see light.

    Nothing to do but lay down next to eachother,
    Feeling the warmth of one another.

    Look into my eyes,
    From me you'll never get a lie.

    Look into my eyes,
    I'll make sure you never cry.

    Beautiful girl I'm in love with you,
    Without you I wouldn't know what to do.




    Beautiful Girl 5

    Hey beautiful girl, it's just me,
    I was thinking we could go to the sea.

    We could see some seagulls flying around,
    And maybe some crabs that are waterbound.

    Lay down and cuddle in the breeze,
    Just promise me that you wont tease.

    We can watch the waves skim across the sea of blue,
    Oh beautiful girl, my lovely girl, I'm in love with you.




    Beautiful Girl 6

    Beautiful Girl is our relationship real,
    Is it my love that you can't feel?

    Or is there something not right,
    If so please let me be your light.

    I know it seems I don't have much wit
    Just let me try to help you fix it

    I can stand you in many moods, but never blue,
    Please beautiful girl, just let me help you.




    Beautiful Girl 7

    Don't count on me running out of things to say,
    Beautiful girl, I only want to make your soul sway.

    I wish I could see through your eyes,
    Only to find out why

    I've let myself create this long enough now,
    Reject or accept me, I'll only ask how.

    I'm going to be rejected,
    and then to all this pain I'll be subjected

    Then I suppose all I can do is cry
    and then that same old question "Why, oh why?"
    Never answered, even after I die.




    Beautiful Girl 8

    Beautiful girl, oh beautiful girl I love you so,
    I'll put it into words to make your eyes glow.

    If given all the world's time I'd take a million years,
    to only just examine your ears.

    to stare into your eyes,
    the number would reach the skies.

    and to look at your nose,
    Not even I know...

    and your face in whole, that beautiful face,
    I wouldn't stop until I lay dormant in a case.So yeah, I'm not really asking for CnC, just putting it here for you guys to enjoy.

    Also, I've written some more... gruesome, nastier poems so if anyone would like those, you can PM me.

    "Judge a man by his questions,
    not his answers."
    -Voltaire




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    I know you arent quite asking for CnC... but I really liked "The Human Stain", Just as a fun fact :P
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    Quote Originally Posted by [PHXN] New001 View Post
    I know you arent quite asking for CnC... but I really liked "The Human Stain", Just as a fun fact :P
    Hehe, thanks.

    "Judge a man by his questions,
    not his answers."
    -Voltaire




  4. #4
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    i'd think about exploring less superficial subject matter.




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    I have read 2 of them now, but I love them, and I want to see more in the future!


    Dare the Devil

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    -Domino-

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