Wolverine: Rage

[Karter]

Deviant Art Link:
http://smrzy.deviantart.com/art/Wolv...Rage-155240904

[Scrib]

Ok, not to pick on you man, but I'm really sick of people making huge tags and calling them lp's, be more creative! Instead of doing like you always do in a tag, experiment, jeez...

[-MM.Kritez]

its just as much a LP as your LP's... :/

Personally this is pretty nice, i like what you have done, but the render needs to blend better with your background, they are not matching up well for me.

good work

[Karter]

Ok, not to pick on you man, but I'm really sick of people making huge tags and calling them lp's, be more creative! Instead of doing like you always do in a tag, experiment, jeez...

Sorry...but that was one of the dumbest things I've heard in a while. :/

It's my first LP in a while, so I was doing something that I was used to.

Thanks for the comment Kritez.

[Scrib]

"its just as much a LP as your LP's... :/"

I never said otherwise, what i'm saying is that people should be more creative rather than just doing what they do on tags on a large canvas...

[gr4ph1kP4ND4]

theres a certain extent to which i agree with scribbles, but i do think that theres a huge difference between creating a big picture and creating a sig. personally i think theres a lot more creativity going into an LP cause you've got so much more space to fill, but i do think that when doing an LP you should try to step out of the signature-style.
text: not my fave, although i have no room to talk cause A) i suck at text as most know and B) cause i dont really know what i'm talking about...
i agree the background doesnt fit the object of focus, but the colors work out very nicely.
did you make the background?
if you did i'll be amazed
if not i'll be disappointed. =\
sorry...
the background and the foreground are two different styles of art. the background is very soft, with a moonlit glow and a smooth eerie style, while the foreground is all hard lines, with a strong line of motion and a cut-out very defined quality to it. the background takes away too much from the foreground to really work all that well especially since the two styles are so different. if you're going to put two art styles into a single piece of art you've gotta make sure they blend like hell for it to work.

the fx were good just out of place
and the colors look great.

9/10
it looks good
just doesnt feel right (if ya get mah drift >.>)

[Karter]

Hey Panda, thank you for the seriously detailed critique! I know exactly what you are saying. Since I look at it harder, I get your point.

Here is the link to the background:
http://bestgamewallpapers.com/fable-2/dark-entrance

So, as you can see, I added a bit to it, re-blurred it, added the bats and the moon, and just the coloring. I probably should have worked the render into blending a bit better, but I'll remember that for next time.

Thanks :P

[Xelo]

everything's said, just want to say that i lurve it!!