Learn , Live , Hope

**Applejuice** · 06-04-2010, 11:30 AM

"Learn from yesterday,
Live for today,
Hope for tommorow." -Unknown

**Killer93yo** · 06-04-2010, 12:04 PM

Cool

nothing more to say

**Applejuice** · 06-04-2010, 12:46 PM

thanks

any tips?

**Applejuice** · 06-05-2010, 11:10 AM

no other repliez?

**schultz** · 06-06-2010, 02:08 AM

i like it

<3 the text but i think you should think of a better color scheme..

great job nonetheless

***Andrew*** · 06-06-2010, 11:19 PM

It looks good but the text placement makes the eyes kinda wonder off. maybe repositioning it will help?

**flatty** · 06-08-2010, 10:32 AM

Hmm, i'm not so fond of this piece.
There are too many different colors, and the font is not that appealing.
Also the bg is a bit odd

Next piece m8

***Fur*** · 06-08-2010, 11:09 AM

Hm, its ok I guess. The colors dont really fit well together at all and the flow of the text is off. To me this art looks very chaotic.

**Dungus** · 06-10-2010, 06:16 AM

As said before, it looks kinda chaotic, with too many colours.

Also tomorrow is spelled wrong.

**KidBuu** · 06-10-2010, 09:44 AM

umm, ok My Flat Opinion = Bad typography, Bad choice of colors and Bad placement.

try it a different way.

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