Jamemba

[chonfat]

CnC please Vertical btw o_o

[zole]

Hmmm over saturated and you need to blend the render more, imo this render looks like it would suit and horizontal tag instead of a vert, maybe extract it from there into a horizontal tag add some more smudging or c4d's and try and blend the text into the tag, so get rid of that black block because it takes my eye away from the tag overall good work but keep at it

-Dan

[Xelo]

.. as zole says, oversaturated wich makes the focal lq. so tone it down and it might be ok.
i like it in this vert tag tho..