Sherlock Holmes

[zole]

Thought i'd make a tag of my favorite film because i haven't yet!

i need topaz tbh, i feel that is what this tag needs :/

V1:


V2:


V3:


C&C

thanks.
-Dan

[Takken]

I think the level of contrast is too varying. The dark, then bright green and then the strong lighting emanating from the focal is too strong. I think the placement of the C4D and composition okay but work on the lighting, color scheme and contrast.

[zole]

Hmm ill add some more contrast

V3 up!

[Downfall]

i dont think i like it sorry :S

[Lith]

your use of c4d is too dominant. erase out parts of the c4d at the top left and possibly behind the top of the render.
Its also kind of wierd b/c your lighting is coming from the bottom, when it should be coming from the top leftish
Id agree with takken when he suggests theres too much contrast and not enough natural lighting.

Don't use your c4ds overwhelmingly.
Personally im okay with the colors, except the lighting throws it off, and it could use some adjustment layers

[Kotora]

I'm a fan of your style, but this just looks too much like an experiment of different things with poor execution.

[zole]

Yeahh was a bit of an experiment that failed! haha i guess i shouldnt experiment whilst high as a kite xD maybe ill get it next time thanks for the comments guys

[Vel]

tbh I would probably like it more if it was all B&W.

[dub]

Hey now nothing wrong with experimenting while baked because thats when I produce my best work! but anyways yeah I think that c4d placement was your issue in this one. Work on that and this could look much better. kiu