sig for sotw 14

[dragoneye]

could post this to the experienced artist place but i think that even the experienced people should post only their best work there :blink: c&c

[Samuel]

Render is way to ove rblended, i cant tell what it is. The multi colors arent that great either, the colors dont match. The grid is to strong decrease the opacity. I can hardly read any of the text either.

[LANfest_00]

I think the big guy pretty much summed it up.
I get the feeling you tried to push to much in a small place... it didn't work.

[Juicy]

Grid is too deep. Need more contrast.

[MiNdFrEaK]

yep, i agree with everyone. esp on the render being OVER blended, it is too hard to see. the text def needs some work to. and yea tone down the grid aswell.

[dragoneye]

well, i have a singlecolored and gridless version at home, right now im at school so ill post later