The left side of the sig is too bright.
Also I would like to see some more blending.
If you create your lightning source use the burn and dodge tool also too create right lightning on the render. Cause now the right side of zaraki looks just as bright as the left side. Burn the right side of the render
The text ould be better. Move it a bit closer to the focal point and I would also move it to a lower position.
I agree with most of what cs4 said. I think the wireframe at the right don't fit and the yellow spot to the left is too bright and does not fit. The lighting is way off. How can you have lighting at the left and the right side is dim? I can tell you are not working with a concept or idea in mind. You won't achieve a good compo that way. Keep at it mate!
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Originally Posted by Slave
