Snake

[schultz]

cnc

[Takken]

Nice use of the wireframes. I suggest you adjust the contrast so it can be appreciated more. I think the lighting needs work and the arrangement and manipulation of elements as well, such as the splatter in the BG. It looks too spaced out and nothing is solid. I like how you went with the color scheme of the render and applied a basic one of your own. nice thinking. I also think the blending of the wireframe was nice as well. Work on your lighting, contrast and composition. Keep at it!

[Xelo]

if i look at the render the light comes from the left. the shadow suggests that the light comes from the right tho..
other then that i like it a lot. nice colors and effects.

[Dron]

well personally for me lighting is not that necessary in this peace, its like a character in a comic book..just i think without text it would look way better.

[schultz]

yeah, i really did not care about the lighting because its supposed to look like a drawing of some sort :P

thanks for the comments fellas