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Thread: Obito :3

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    Smile Obito :3


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    It has a nice atmosphere, I think it would look better if that lighting was coming from the left side.




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    really nice smudging render looks either over sharpened or just lq but i agree with Maietrix i think you should dim down the lighting on the right and also put a little on the left



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    Hmm this looks nice like the sharpenes and the mood in the tag keep up the good work...

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    yea the way the light is shown on the left side of the render calls for the lighting to be on the lower left side of the tag.The smudging is good(lol allot better than mine :P),but the bg seems to me to have to much neg space in it.Mayby just a little more fx added to it might do the trick.I would have to agree the render it self is a little to sharpened.But all in all good job.

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    thx guys is my first work who i laid for gfx forum

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    I absolutely love this piece, awesome background suiting the render.
    The only thing I shall say is the white dots on the right maybe fade them a little?

    Awesome; kiu


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