Outline: From Tutorial

[bcfcant]

From marioman's tutorial.

[Downfall]

Dont like it sorry you should of just outlined the render :s imo

[Maietrix]

I think it would be cooler if you added some vibrant colours, its looking a bit boring right now

[Wizdum]

I like it a lot. I tried this tutorial but I have a shaky hand so i failed :/
But this is very nice.
What maetrix said is right.
Try adding some colors.
It would stand out a lot more and it would look better.

[marioman77]

i like the smoothness of the lines but as other people said add color and don't outline everything in the stock just the detail. like around the hair looks bad
but good job KIU

[Takken]

I like the outlines and patches of color. Gives it a nice atmosphere. Again, soft brushing doesn't create good lighting. You have to work on the compo's schematics. Use other tools like dodge to help. Work on lighting mate. Keep at it!