Light Catching - thijsdesign. CnC! :D

[thijs']

My Second Attempt At Large Art.

I got 2 Versions tell me which one is the best on my poll, And Command about My 2 versions.

V1.


V2.

(YES only text/background is Changed..)

V3.


CnC!



I Know The Text Sucks... It's hard to think of a good text, and certainly for someone who is Dutch and not has English as their mother language..

Owww Yeah This Whas Also My First Piece With Pen Tool In It, Tell Me If U Liked It.

[thijs']

topic updated.

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i like v2 the best for some reason the others look empty without all that text lol im no LP guru but thats what i like

[thijs']

Thanks For sharing (:

[bcfcant]

Version one is better but the text ain't great.

Remove the outer glow of the box around the text, it really doesn't fit.

Colours seem too dull, they should be bright for light, you know?

keep it up

[thijs']

Version one is better but the text ain't great.

Remove the outer glow of the box around the text, it really doesn't fit.

Colours seem too dull, they should be bright for light, you know?

keep it up

thanks for comment, But i can't edit it anymore i accedently romoved the psd file... >.>

But still wan't to know what is wrong with it and what can be better (:

Learn from it