Yoshimitsu

[Nevad]

Since my comp crashed and i lost all my photoshop brushes and fonts i thought might be fun to make something with only the basics.

[Takken]

I find there is a too much extravagant clash of colors and its going good. There is a lack of contrast and the lighting is too harsh. Needs more elements to add to the flow. Work on your color scheme and composition. Keep at it!

[bcfcant]

Colours aren't very complimenting the render imo.

Text is somewhat decent because you can hardly see it :P

add some more sharp effects imo;

kiu mate