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Last edited by Dump Account; 07-05-2010 at 07:30 AM.
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I like the way you positioned the text, and the concept of it.
However, the tag lacks on depth and because of that, it loses the focal point. I think it would look nice if you blurred the background a little.
Also, the stock doesn't fit the background due to the lighting and colors, so I'd advice you to work on the lighting. In my opinion, it would look nice with a mini light source placed at the top right area, overlapping a bit of her head.
When it comes to colors, a good way to blend the background w/ stock is using g- map. It works wonders.

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K, going to fix the depth. And I'll blur the background a little bit more. And fix the colors so they blend a little better.
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 Originally Posted by Fayfie
a good way to blend the background w/ stock is using g- map. It works wonders.
gradient map?
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Btw, this is my Primary account.
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Yes that was meant to be gradient map :P
Pretty good but I do agree with fayfie apart from the text, I don't like it; its too blurred imo.
but depth definately needs work in this one,
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Needs to be sharpened up a notch! Not really likin' the white stroke in front and color scheme is too dull. BG is lackluster. Work on your composition. Keep at it!
 Originally Posted by Slave
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