First go at typography.

[xilez]

Been really short of inspiration lately so I picked a few lines from a current favorite song of mine. First go at something like this.



The quote is taken from this song here at 1:35-1:43

Critiques welcome as well as all advice!

[xilez]

link fixed.

[schultz]

not bad for a first, mate! i think you should read the 10 golden rules of typography so that you'll get better!

[xilez]

thanks man, i took a look at it and i definitely broke the 3 font max rule! Dualy noted

[Andrew]

its... interesting...
im not sure if it makes a sentence or if its a bunch of words
but i say theres much room for improvement on this one man
try making it more.. legible

[Fur]

For a first its not too bad. I dont know what it says at all though. Looks jus tlike you placed the words in a random order? The colors all look good though.

This is a video that shows you how real typography should look
http://www.youtube.com/watch#!v=NoTJsEBXVUo .

[xilez]

for anyone who is confused on what is being said, they are song lyrics from the song posted up top.

[excellence]

its kind of a mess, work on your organization, after all i think your trying to get the viewer to read a message, just make sure they can be able to