Need advices pls. I'm still a newbie.

[lupaan]

The second signature which I made:


I'll appreciate all your advices. Thx

[Aether]

It looks like on the first one you stretched the render, remember to hold shift whilst resizing it so it'll keep it's original proportions. Try to have your effect go into a certain direction so that there's a sense of flow. I suggest you read some beginner tutorials to improve your basics.

[chonfat]

well... did u sized the render smaller? if u did always use shift while doing it and well... the bg and the c4d use arnt really blended or going witht he flow of the render... and the render looks really bad cut o.o and text needs some work too... i would recommend to use some tuts to start off and then when u understand ur own style go for ur own creations

[Takken]

What Aehter said. You need to work on your basics. Go through the tuts we have here man

[lupaan]

Thx alot all. I will practice more

[lupaan]

The new one, please give advices again

[DarkaiX]

that looks much better you could maybe add more c4d render still looks abit strected and choppy text is good. but still you improved

[Vicious Zen]

I'd also suggest looking up some things like color theory, type theory, and composition. There's tons of tutorials all over the net. Those are a couple basic things you're gonna wanna know for sure. It's not all about knowing effects, it's knowing how to use them properly, too.

[lupaan]

I try to make another one, but I think this siggy is worse than the older one.
Ohh... God, I need a long time of pratice >.<
CnC plizzz.

[interllect]

hold SHIFT when resizing... and all off these are either cluttered, are flat depth wise, have a serious color scheme mismatch issue and/or have a serious lighting issue... i recommend u focus on reading some advance tutorials dedicated on fixing some of these particular problems in future...