KiD CuDI

[xXStrongXx]

C'n''C First Sig For The Void
p.s its prolly not that good becaus my blood sugar was low wen i was doin this :[

[xXStrongXx]

bump??

[interllect]

get rid of the boarder.... and get a better quality render/stock... effects are cluttery & there is no continuity in the overall flow.... compo is meh ok i guess.... depth is pretty flat.... colors are way too heavy on the eyes... and iv never found text to be necessary on a sig unless it is done in a clever or unique way... this text has neither attribute...

its ok though considering u had low blood sugar at the time...kiu

[Aether]

Keep the border and stick with this stock, the effects are fine it's just the squares/text that take focus away from the focal. Depth could indeed use work and needs better lighting.

[Takken]

Border needs to go and the focal seems overcontrasted. Create more effective lighting mate and play around with the tones of the image to give it a more cleaner look.

[Vicious Zen]

C'n''C First Sig For The Void
p.s its prolly not that good becaus my blood sugar was low wen i was doin this :[

I'm pretty much gonna second everything that was already said. You've definitely gotta work on your flow, you have too many elements all over the place, with no real unity. Bring your piece together, make use of negative space.
Personally, I like text, and type, but it's nothing too special here. I think it works, but it doesn't really add much.