Slipknot

[+Josh Fx]

This was a sig that I made for a friend. For some reason he likes big canvases so I tried my best on this



Opinions please?

[Vicious Zen]

That shit has some serious potential to be really dope. It's good now, but needs some tweaking in a few places.

Drop the text though, doesn't look good. If you're gonna have text don't stroke it, unless strokes are a common element in your piece. As a general rule, I try never to bring text out, unless it actually looks really nice.
Let's face it, we all see the exact same type, all the time, and at this point, it really only serves to mark pieces with your name.
I'd also make the splatter behind the text smaller, so it just goes behind the text, not that much higher. I'd also say make some more flat elements like the splatter, if you're going to leave that one flat.

Last thing I would try is to incorporate the dude into the stuff you've got going on around him. His legs in particular, but I'd try and keep it real subtle, maybe a TINY bit of smudging.

[+Josh Fx]

thanks for the advice.