"Halo: Escape"

[Gecko81]

[Cap'n Jazz]

I think there's just too much contrast between the foreground and background. I think the effects are a tad overboard.

[Draywin848]

I like the text and the topaz and effects looks awesome but yeah there's too much difference in the colours, try just adding 1 or 2 really faint gradient maps and it'll look sweet.

[chonfat]

@above impresive bro... text could use some work too... anyway KIU