halo

[devalt]

dont like this 1 very well the render is screwed up and i didnt notice it until i finished so i messed around with it for a while and this is what i got

[Vicious Zen]

I suggest you check out the typography thread over in the graphics discussion. And look up some composition and color theory. These are things that are more important to know and understand than effects.

For example, you have no flow, none of your elements play off of each other. I'd suggest working with that for starters. Make everything you put into it work with each other to help guide the eye across your piece.

[devalt]

yea i realy knew i shouldnt have posted this its very low grade work and thats not what i want to be known for

[Vicious Zen]

It doesn't matter what you're known for. It's about your own personal growth as an artist, no one starts out that great. Just keep sharing, and getting feedback. Learn some new techniques, know your theory, and just keep working at it. =]

[devalt]

thats just it i know how to make sigs much better than what that shows and i h8 that sig with a passion atm lol