Naruto Tag (C&C por favor)

[Tatsujin79]

ok im working on flow mostly with this one, and it wasn't till after i uploaded it that i realized the light is in the wrong place, it should be behind him *DO'H* i played around more with the colors to bring out the orange, red and yellow more.




ballzzzzzz

[Kaka11|LFC]

Ummm the bubble c4d's don't work for me, try chicking it on screen/linear dodge/colour dodge to get rid of the black, either way they kinda take away from the focal, move the render up a bit more maybe so the top would be less blank. Text doesn't work for me. Keep at it.

[theclan10]

The flow is going the right way and tbh the lighting shouldn't be behind him but on the left front of him hehe. as you can see at his hair the light is coming from that way. unless you made it like that. THe lighting should always be at the opposite direction of the shadows. but that's just common sense hehe xD

Good job anways and yes i agree, those bubbles aren't really working. I personally ALWAYS set Bubbles to Either Lighten or Screen.

[Filthy]

the flow is okay, but those c4d balls are kind of motionless so it takes away from the flow

[Tatsujin79]

yeah i just threw those in to fill space (the bubbles) and if you look at him the brightest spot is at the back of his head thats why i said the light should be behind him. Judging from the comments im atleast getting the hang of flow (sort of) and thats what i really wanted to know thanks guys

[Vicious Zen]

ok im working on flow mostly with this one, and it wasn't till after i uploaded it that i realized the light is in the wrong place, it should be behind him *DO'H* i played around more with the colors to bring out the orange, red and yellow more.




ballzzzzzz

Yeeeah, I'd definitely fix that lighting. Overall, looks kinda plain to be honest. You should play with it more. The lack of blending is kind of turning me off to this one, it feels really flat overall, and there's not a lot going on. Your flow is pretty good though.

[Tatsujin79]

Yeeeah, I'd definitely fix that lighting. Overall, looks kinda plain to be honest. You should play with it more. The lack of blending is kind of turning me off to this one, it feels really flat overall, and there's not a lot going on. Your flow is pretty good though.

like could you be more specific? where should i blend at? remember im still learning so sometimes i need things spelled out for me