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    Default Near Death Experience

    Near Death Experience

    The day that terrible accident happened, flew off the ledge landed in the ocean
    Dove deep under the sullen blue, not able to even gasp for air, long overdue
    Floating in despair, I didn't think this is how I would fare

    As I sink to the bottom, looking up I no longer see the light, I'm free.
    This isn't me, I look around it's still deep blue, still under indeed
    I suddenly wake up and see her standing there, her long black hair
    The sun behind her enveloping the slender body, gazing eerily at me

    As the sun-shadowed figure makes her way to the bed, her face, a look of dread
    Gets on her knees, and kisses me, her voice whispers something so sweet
    "I love you." she hoarsely claims, I ponder over her, trying to figure her name
    I try to answer back, my throat is tight, doesn't even feel intact

    "I wish it didn't have to be this way." she whispers softly, the tear streams
    The unknown lady looks into my eyes, causing churns to spring in my insides
    Suddenly she closes the casket, it's dark, I feel like I'm past it

    I slowly blink my eyes open I cough, I'm on the boat again before I was pushed off
    A near death experience, one I won't soon forget, I have one life - this is it.


    Thanks for reading. Don't forget to comment. PLEASE.

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    beautiful. Great job.


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