H2O

[cc.mio]

another abstract
This will be a collection of four works, there will be four basic elements, I started with water

[Gallagher]

Really good, all except the H2O text imo. Seems out of place and too simple for this type of piece.

[cc.mio]

o yeah, my text sux always
thanks for positive reply

[Gallagher]

o yeah, my text sux always
thanks for positive reply

My pleasure mate, looking forward to seeing the other elements.

[Scrib]

Don't put text in pieces like this. Period. Unless you do some really awesome typography to fit it in. also, its looking really flat and monotone. Adding a foreground would make sense, this just looks like a bg with no focal or point of interest. keep working, youll get there eventually.

[cc.mio]

no more text in abstract works..
focal is supposed to be at the right side of the text, my eyes always goes there first, but you may have probably different feeling of this piece
thank you very much for comment

[Derosion]

It looks nice, it has that watery type of feeling .
Yeah, remove the text and that's a nice piece.

Kiu.

o yeah, my text sux always
thanks for positive reply

Join the club .