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    Default CHECK [updated]

    Okay, so I know I haven't really been commenting on any tags lately. Haven't had time, but I just busted this one out of nowhere, just before work, and I'd really like to get some CnC on it. Will go on a comment spree when I get back home though, I promise.





    Last edited by Vicious Zen; 08-24-2010 at 03:30 AM.






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    i really like the colour scheme of this tag, its very nice and matches, the focal is clear which is good, and the text isn't to noticeable which i think is nice, i dont like having noticeable text, maybe if i were to make a suggestion; decrease the canvas size because the left side is VERY empty, also i might topaz VERY little (very very little) just to clean it up a bit.
    i like it~


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    The effects are intresting, however it looks way too sharp, (the focal more than anything). I thinky you should tone it down a bit.
    Another thing is that there is a lot of open and blank space on the left. Maybe add effects and crop it down. It might also look better with a border. Since it is extremely easy to make a border it wouldnt hurt to try it out. If it doesnt fit, you could easily take it off
    Colour and flow are great, but the main problem for me is the emptyness of the left, compared to the right.
    Keep it up

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    Hmm, nice! The blur between the background effects and the displacement map on the left is a bit abrupt, but i mean it still works. You've got a distinct style, its pretty unique.




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    I think if you chop off 25% on the left it'll be dope.


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    i think the focal drowns in the effects and it's oversharpened. I don't like the colors, but that is personaly.

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    BAM!
    Didn't feel like cropping it, wanted to just work on it some more.






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    i definitely like the 2nd version more, but i think the border shouldn't have been that light of a colour, also i do think the 2nd version is better, but i still think 1st version being cropped would end up looking best, and as its already been said, that render is majourly over sharpened, or just a really crappy render, lol.


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    I love the effects I must say.
    I just think that the effects are too much around the focal and not spaced out around the sig.
    Good sig, but cropping it would help it a lot.

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