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  1. 08-24-2010, 01:09 PM #1
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    Default Abstract Smudge - What to add?

    I made this little thingy but its not finished yet.

    What can I add to make it look better/finished
    Except text.

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    It looks weird to just have that little part in the middle maybe expanding it more could help. Other than that its nice and I like where you are going with this.

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    Maybe is would look better if it was less linear
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    to much negative space. work on your smudging and create more of an aura around your central focal.
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    make the bottom expand horizontal.
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    You need to have more going off to the sides, there's too little going on. Even just a bit of texturing on the sides could help you tremendously.






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  7. 08-26-2010, 07:31 AM #7
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    Ok!
    Thanks, Ill post a new version soon!
    THanks a lot
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    it looks lq or oversharpened to me, or am i wrong?
    From scratch, just smudging the XL way
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    too much negative space, needs more, try using different brushes as well for smudging, also try to have a set focal...can still be abstract





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